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Lets separate the confusion between ‘tourism’ and ‘travel’ straight up. There’s a lot of writing seen in the newspapers, blogs, magazines and other convenient locations to cater for ‘tourism’. So, what’s tourism? Ok, tourists generally need a holiday to go to plan therefore convenient writing or immediate information is great for them. Many people who set out for holidays have limited time, have families, or are taking a quick break from their regular routine. So, they don’t have time to experiment like a travelling opportunist – the ‘traveller’ – who sets out on adventure for who knows how long. These travellers are usually out to turn over every stone she/ he can in order to squeeze the hidden ingredients out of an unknown destination.

It’s important to acknowledge that we have two separate markets here. Sure, many guidebooks, tours, travel packages, recommended sights, tourist traps, or “gringo traps,” I like to call them here in South America, can occasionally provide hidden secrets but each tourist will probably have a similar story to share upon completion of their journey. Yes, the writings lour tourists to different locations and serve their purpose, but they’re often very plane Jane.

Travel writing as a genre goes deeper than just providing simple location information. It attempt to tell a story from different layers and isn’t just about the positives of a trip. It’s often full of the low points or the unexpected mishaps which may have gotten the traveller into an awful pickle. This form of travel literature can make an excellent narrative tale. If we have a story about a man fumbling is way through South America, with limited Spanish / Portuguese, on a shoestring budget who has his credit card duplicated, then cancelled in Iguazu Falls, he’ll have a hell of fumble trying to organize his way into a bus ticket, or cash for some kind of transport out of the their. He’ll probably miss the cities only tourist attraction – the Iguazu Falls – and have a hell of an interesting narrative – travel writing piece. This writing is different to your usually tourism writing filling your weekend newspaper.

Travel writing as a genre is very open. I think at this point it could be an idea to discuss some of the qualities of good travel writing. Thomas Swick writes an excellent article Roads Not Taken which gives a great outline of what travel writing is all about. I recommend reading this. I’ve also given further thoughts regarding Swick’s essay. I’ve mention some other notable travel writers below also.

Take a moment now to read Roads Not Taken then return here to improve your travel writing.

Roads Not Taken by Thomas Swick raises the question: “Why is so much travel writing so boring?” Most will agree that a lot of travel writing can be exactly this; it can “leave us feeling empty” according to Swick who also refers to this as “Journalism’s tiramisu”.

So, what is it that separates the good travel stories from the bad?

Roads Not Taken (Swick, 2001) addresses six essential elements of travel writing that are important for a story’s success: history, sharing a journey’s people, imagination, insight, humour and dialogue; many of these elements are also found to be essential for quality fiction writing (Granville, 1990).

Too often travel stories fail to address essential writing elements and are saturated with positive, sweetened journalism, written by people who’ve received an incentive for their thoughts. So, In the 1980s, according to Swick, a tarnished image immerged for travel writers as “free-loaders who simply found a cheap way to travel”.

Three travel writers who do not fit this bill are Bruce Chatwin, Peter Davis and Ryszard Kapuscinski. These writers utilise a broad range of elements mentioned by Swick during their travel writing. They also use additional features of their own. Although, each of these writers uses elements mentioned by Swick, each of them does this with a slightly different balance.

Bruce Chatwin provides travel writing with a strong, non-patronising voice and is able to do this from different writing points of view. He writes about journeys, which are not your every day travel journeys. Chatwin constructs compact sentences, which pack a punch, with each compact sentence building onto the last.

In Patagonia (Chatwin, 2003) and A Coup (Chatwin, 1991) are both examples of Chatwin’s work, which provide history, character development, scene development and insight into Chatwin’s journeys. Chatwin strategically utilises dialogue to create scenes with characters and also gives insight into his travel location. He provides his dialogue carefully, in short progressive doses of information, by characters he meets during his travels giving insight and allowing readers to further connect with his writing. At times during In Patagonia, Chatwin uses Spanish language and foreign accents with the occasional broken English in his dialogue. This advances the story by developing characters and often has hidden subtext. His dialogue is also blended in amongst text to maintain the story’s rhythm:

 “In Gaiman the schoolmaster’s wife introduced me to the pianist. He was a thin nervous boy with a drained face and eyes that water in the wind. His hands were strong and red. The ladies in the Welsh Choir had adopted him (Chatwin, 1994).” After giving this scene development and introducing the “pianist,” Chatwin then goes on to connect the reader with the character with the pianist’s dialogue: “And now I play the Pathétique. Yes?” This writing uses dialogue, insight, and character development and also offers a pleasant voice for its readers in amongst Chatwin’s other text.

Chatwin also pays particular attention to providing history during his writing, although he also does this in a fashion that does not jolt or disrupt the beat of the story.

In Patagonia and A Coup are both examples of Chatwin’s travel writing which utilise elements of fiction writing (Grenville, 1990) during nonfiction work. Chatwin’s writing almost ticks all the boxes for Swick’s elements, although unfortunately, lacks Swick’s sixth element – humour.

Peter Davis is a travel writer who writes similarly to Chatwin, though he incorporates mild humour into his stories. Davis also presents scene development, character development, insight, dialogue and history into his writing. Over all, he has an even balance of Swick’s six elements without lacking humour.

Peter Davis utilises humour in his essay Bollywood blockbuster (Davis, 2001) in the opening paragraph: “I don’t usually allow a complete stranger to remove my trousers.” This creates a potentially humorous scene and also that extra curiosity from readers to further explore the sentences that follow.

During Bollywood blockbuster Davis introduces a character with the use of dialogue: “My name is Arjun,” which tunes his readers into wanting more information about this character. “I’m a film producer and I’ve been watching you … would like to do a film with me?” Davis then writes. He afterwards goes on to provide insight, related to this character and about the travel story’s location: “in India no request is what is seems” and “perhaps he was after my camera?” Immediately, hands-on experience is sensed from Davis giving the reader the impression Davis is street-smart in the ways of India. This comforts readers to trust his insight into India’s darker side and engages readers to want more information from Davis’ experiences in India. Once readers open their guard up to Davis he then goes on to give his knockout sentence: “Worse, he might have wanted my kidneys for a transplant,” which gives a shock effect for readers as Davis gives the chilling reality of the third world.

Davis also strategically inserts historical information into his text: “The massive bell from the 15th-century Metropolitan Cathedral announces the hour (Davis, 2002).” This sentence alone has been constructed with history, scene and insight. Davis cleverly structures sentences in a similar fashion throughout his writing to not disrupt sentence rhythm during his stories.

The other writer who has a high standard of travel writing is Ryszard Kapuscinski. This writer uses many anecdotes in the midst of his non-patronizing voice. Kapuscinski generally writes from a first person narrative, which puts his opinion in the firing line for readers. A typical example of his writing is: “Where ever one goes in this word, one will boast about how far their ancestors had come or reached (Kapuscinski, 1994).” Kapuscinski then goes onto to give his personal point of view: “People need this awareness.” This opinion by  Kapuscinski runs the risk of loosing readers, at least if they don’t agree with his writing.

Kapuscinski almost uses all of Swick’s “essential elements,” although he uses these elements with a different commitment to Chatwin and Davis. Kapuscinski tends to provide a larger dedication to history and education for his readers. This is fine, although an issue with Kapuscinski’s writing is it also lacks humour. This leaves his writing often flat. Another issue with Kapuscinski’s writing is he tends to tell his readers about his journeys rather than show them. The following paragraph is an example of this:

“…in the Susamyr Valley, two hundred kilometres from Funze, Dzhumal herds the sheep of the Panfilov kolkoz, and because he distinguished himself in this work, he was awarded by government decree the title of Outstanding Shephard of the Kirghiz Soveit Socialist Republic (Kapuscinski, 1994).”

Davis, on the other hand, shows his readers with scene development, characters, insight and more:

“…in the late afternoon, in another corner of the square, Aztec dancers pound their drums with such vigour that the church bells are almost silenced. Else where in the square rap dancers, political demonstrators, tradesmen, shoeshiners and entrepreneurs congregate and push their causes (Davis, 2002).”

On top of telling his story, rather than showing it, Kapuscinski also neglects dialogue; when he does use dialogue it’s provided in large blocks of conversation. These blocks of dialogue could do better if broken down into smaller dialogue additions (Grenville, 1990). Scene development is also lacking in Kapuscinski’s writing, as shown in his above paragraph. At times Kapuscinski substitutes this lack of scene development with dramatic nonfiction inclusions such as, “During the blasting of a block a coal had fallen and killed workers. They managed to dig out the body, but he had died instantly (Kapuscinski, 1991).” This writing lacks scene development, character development, insight, humour and according to Swick, it is running the risk of being “boring”. Kapuscinski needs take a leaf out of Davis’ ad Chatwin’s stories and use more of Swick’s elements of travel writing.

The following attempt by Kapuscinski has a little more creativeness than his past paragraph, although once again, he’s telling his readers rather than showing them.

“The truck is racing through the dusk, its headlamps, like pupils searching for the finish line. It’s close: Jeziorany, twenty kilometres. Another half hour, and we’ll be there. The truck is pushing hard, but it’s touch and go. They old machine wasn’t meant for such a haul (Kapuscinski, 1991).”

Bruce Chatwin, Peter Davis and Ryszard Kapuscinski are three writers with great examples of travel writing. They help to get travel writers out of the ditch as being known as “free-loaders who simply found a cheap way to travel”. Swick’s six essential elements are a good guide to getting travel stories off the ground and in a similar direction to the three travel writers discussed. It seems the balance of Swick’s elements can be played with to create different stories for different readers. Too much of one element, then not enough of another, may bring a story crashing down; failure to include any of these elements may label a travel story as: “Journalism’s tiramisu”.

That’s it for this week in my travel writing course. If you’re keen for extra reading you may wish to track down some of the reading from the “Annotated Bibliography” below.

Discussion you may wish to add to the reply section below:

 

·      What difference do you see between tourism and travel?

·      What elements of writing do you expect to see in enjoyable travel writing?

·      Name some of Swick’s points for nice travel writing.

ANNOTADED BIBLIOGRAPHY

Chatwin, B 1991, ‘ A Coup’, in B Buford (ed.), The Best of Granta travel, Granta Books, UK, pp. 72-89.

This story is an example of nonfiction writing which has been created to read like a work of fiction. The story has been told with imagination and creativeness to give an exciting travel story.

This piece of writing has been provided with tension, conflict, subtext, character development, scene development and plot pace that keeps the story moving quickly. There are great examples of using dialogue to bind readers to a story in this piece of nonfiction writing.

 

Chatwin, B 2003, In Patagonia, Penguin, London.

This writing is an extended piece of travel writing exploring South America’s region known as “Patagonia”. The writing is the work of nonfiction, although incorporates many techniques of fiction writing to provide a well structured story.

The author writes the story as a first person narrative, although there are chapters where the author has more focus on the story’s characters, then the story is told as a third person narrative. During the story, characters, history, insight, and scene development are given to bind readers to the story. This writing is an excellent example of travel writing with much to show and tell.

Davis, P 2002, ‘Mexico City’, Eureka Street, vol. 12, no. 7, September, pp. 24-6.

This is a short piece of travel writing providing an insightful visit to Mexico City. The author provides a style of writing which incorporates his readers and attempts to include them in the story.

This piece has many elements of fiction writing mixed with realism. There are useful tips for those visiting Mexico City, history on the location, character introduction and development, dialogue and the story is delivered with an enthusiastic pace. This writer has many tips for travel writers wishing to develop their skills for travel stories.

Davis, P 1998, ‘Bollywood blockbuster’, The Age, 6 June, p. 130.

A short piece of writing is about the writer’s journey to India and his experience with the film industry there.

In this writing the author provides a first person narrative about his adventure and accidental stumbling upon India’s film industry. The writer provides humorous characters and education about India’s film industry. Although, this education is not in depth, the reading is set with a fast, entertaining pace and provides an interesting read for those wishing to spark up their travel writing.

Grenville, K 1990, ‘Getting Started’, The writing book: a workbook for fiction writers, Allen & Unwin, St Leonards, pp. 16-38.

This is a textbook for fiction writers who are starting or who wish to improve their fiction writing skills.

The author addresses many variables which separate readers and fiction writing. In doing this she provides many different elements of writing such as, character, point of view, voice, dialogue, scene, just to name a few, to attempt to bring fiction writer’s attention to these elements to improve the connection between their writing and their readers. The book is a great text for those wishing to produce quality fiction writing.

Grenville, K 1990, ‘Dialogue’, The writing book: a workbook for fiction writers, Allen & Unwin, St Leonards, pp. 101-23.

This writing extract by Kate Grenville focuses on dialogue in fiction writing. Grenville provides suggestions for creating efficient dialogue and mentions flawed dialogue can separate a reader from a story.

The author defines dialogue as: ‘an artificial expression designed to live on the page’. Grenville writes dialogue is not the same as conversation and highlights the use of punctuation to perfect dialogue. Grenville also labels dialogue as: ‘an optional extra’. She indicates writers need to be selective with what they consider to be that ‘optional extra’. Helpful tips are given which are useful for creative non-fiction writers.

Swick, T 2001, ‘Roads Not Taken’, Columbia Journalism Review, vol. 40, no. 1, May-June, pp. 65-7.

This piece of writing aims to identify the elements which separate the good travel writing from the bad. The author mentions most travel writing is boring and often done by “free-loaders” looking for cheap travel.

In the essay the author outlines elements which he believes are required for successful travel writing. The piece mentions travel writing requires history, people, insight, humour, dialogue and imagination.

 

Kapuscinski, R 1994, Imperium, Granta Books, London.

An extended work providing history and education of the countries which make up Central Asia during the times of the “Imperium”.

The writer provides a large amount of information in the form of personal anecdotes. This writing is given as a first person narrative and provides many writing techniques similar to those of fiction writing. The story gives an example of a writer who tells his readers rather than shows them. There is dialogue and character throughout the story, although there is a larger dedication to history and education for readers. Over all, it’s not a bad book for travel writers looking to move their writing forward.

Kapuscinski, R 1991, ‘Stiff’, in B Buford (ed.), The Best of Granta travel, Granta Books, London, pp. 192-9.

A nonfiction travel journey given by the writer as a first person narrative. The writer gives a good example of travel writing, although it lacks humour. With this lack of humour aside, there are still many things to take from this piece for the emerging travel writer.

The author provides information throughout the journey which attempts to give mild shock to his readers. There is a fast pace to the story and plenty of insight.

Gaston Cavalleri is an Australian travel writer, novelist, screenwriter, and jiu-jitsu fighter. To support his travel writing & literature give a “like” to the Facebook page.

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